Sunday

Reprint....

So this is really strange...
Unbeknownst to me

The Miami Herald has re-printed my review of Steve Bogira's wonderful book-Courtroom 302.

Except that it hasn't.

Without contacting me, they've edited it down, removing several laudatory passages. Here's what they did to the last few sentences:

Originally, I wrote that:

"In his analysis of these unknown cases, he carefully assembles and presents a portrait of a system plagued with abusive police officers and corrupt judges, a system more interested in statistics than people, a system more focused on punishment than rehabilitation. And that is why, perhaps as well as anyone before him, in writing about average defendants, Bogira is able to explain a system that "miscarries every day by doing precisely what we ask it to do.""

They re-wrote it to read:

"He carefully assembles and presents a portrait of a system plagued with abusive police officers and corrupt judges, more interested in statistics than people, more focused on punishment than rehabilitation. And that is why he is able to explain a system that ``miscarries every day by doing precisely what we ask it to do.''"

Does that change the tone?
I kind of think it does.
And I think the impression left by the edited review is not as favorable as I intended.
Any thoughts? Opinions? Suggestions as to what to do?

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

they owe you money I think. and its a copyright violation (although maybe not yours to assert as original publication has rights).

I would write a stern letter to them and copy original publication.

oatie